Authorities in every country are trying to achieve financial progress by all possible attempts. However, in this process they sometimes neglect other sectors which require equal priority. This essay will not only include both views but also encompasses my opinion.
On the one hand, economic development is the key for overall development of a country.if a nation makes significant improvement in this field,then all other advancements will automatically accompany that. For example, countries like canada where the authorites have already set the wealth status high, the investers from other parts of the world will be ready to put in their resources. Inaddition, more people will be ready to migrate their facilitating cheap labour, which will further enhance their production.
On the other hand, often governments disregard certain areas like education, health and social values which are indispensible. Furthermore, this can sometimes lead to depletion of resources. For instance, saudi arabia, one of the world's richest countries depends on oil for generating foregin currency. With this going on, the state may run out of its resource.
In conclusion, as every governing body has the responibility towards its citizens, it is pivotal for them to maintain a balance between the both. Sustaing equilibrium will help them to move forward.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , then
...es significant improvement in this field,then all other advancements will automatical...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the richest'.
Suggestion: worlds the richest
... For instance, saudi arabia, one of the worlds richest countries depends on oil for generating...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1145.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53140096618 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93373174562 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.700483091787 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2138747804 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4166666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148116956343 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477116845257 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307348575122 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084115537623 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332965161233 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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