Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Numerous government set their most crucial achievement as economic progress. But few citizens believe that other progresses are as important as economic one. This essay will show a comprehensive discussion of both views and illustrate my opinion about them.
Other types of progress are essential factors for a balanced development of a nation. Not just economic progress, citizens also need a good educational system, healthcare system and environment in particular as well as many others for their living standard . But, it is an undeniable fact that a number of governments focus mainly on economic development and forget other goals. As a result, their citizens suffer from harmful environmental condition . Take china as an example, their government have five-year plans, which mainly focus on developing their economic . As a result, China became the second biggest economy in the world but their people suffered badly from the environment. Beijing, the capital of China, is known as the metropolis with the worst air condition.
On the other hand, economic development is an indispensable task of every government. Without a strong economic foundation, other goals cannot be reached. A strong economy can be a huge stimulation to improve education and healthcare system. In a developed country, people have a lucrative income, they pay more tax and the government can allocate that money to achieve other progresses.
In conclusion, although it is undeniable that the main task of each government is to develop economic . We still have to be aware of other factors, especially the environmental condition for citizen to have a quality life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, well, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40154440154 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02708405345 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3241536923 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.4375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266521246548 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897685846604 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682030839009 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166052461222 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946527842953 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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