Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
In this day and age, we are living in a world where raising children is a heated topic and often discussed. In some families, children are bought whatever they ask for and allowed to do what they want to do . From my perspective, I believe this is not a proper raising children way and it could cause numerous serious consequences when they get older.
Raising a child like the way I have mentioned before could never be a good way because of several reasons. One of them is that their parents will soon be exhausted. Parents have to buy children whatever they ask for. First, it can just be a doll or a ball. But as they grow up, the items a child ask for can be costly machineries such as a ps4 play station, helicopter toy or even the latest computer manufactured . Another reason is that when children can do what they want, it could be dangerous for them. Without any caution, they may want to try cigarettes, pots, drugs or even driving without a license,... which is harmful and can cause fatal death .
An extremely serious consequence I want to share is that future of this student type might not be bright . When they get whatever they want, as a result, they will be indifferent with studying or doing anything. In the future, when they grow up, they would have no motivation working, or even jobless . I assume that is a crucial problem to the society.
In a nutshell , it is better for children themselves to be under their parents control of what they buy and do. Or else, it could cause serious consequence to their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53405017921 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5310481991 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3978844408 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4117647059 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.589963924597 0.244688304435 241% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191667516866 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178701502954 0.0667982634062 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.38630715856 0.151304729494 255% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110205221281 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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