The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The given table and pie charts compare the total number tourists visiting Ashdown Museum and their satisfied rate during two same period before and after the refurbishment.
As can be seen from the table and charts, it is clearly evident that the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum and their satisfaction had been enhanced.
In the year before the refurbishment, there were only 74000 visitors come to Ashdown Museum . After the refurbishment, the number of visitors witnessed a significant increase by 18000 people.
The satisfaction of tourists visiting this museum had also changed considerably. In the previous period , the proportion of satisfied and very satisfied people among surveyed ones made up for 45%, while dissatisfied and very dissatisfied rate occupied for 5% higher. After the refurbishment, is the number of visitors satisfy with the museum increased amazingly and constituted for 75% of the total tourists . Very dissatisfied visitors made up the minority of 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44805194805 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01990099513 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.429719783 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.875 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347375536471 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154939889201 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960018931843 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222912761737 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767252369097 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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