Many graduates nowadays are finding it difficult to get a job. Why do you think this is? How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, there is a phenomenal upsurge in the number of unemployment, which is a challenging problem facing many countries. My following essay will discuss some causes of this issue along with some proactive solutions to address it.
At the outset, the most dominant reason leading to a high rate of unemployment is the students’ lack of soft skills. In all likelihood, students who do not have a good command of some requisite criteria for future jobs including critical thinking, problem-solving, teamwork, etc will find it difficult to find jobs. These skills which are always required from employers tend to be neglected and considered unnecessary in the teaching environment that biased on too much academic learning. Another noteworthy point is that the subject students choose to study is not commensurate with their capacities. For example, if a student who is not adept at drawing or being creative, they are unlikely to become an accomplished designer.
Therefore, people need to take some efficacious measures to tackle this problem as soon as possible. First and foremost, in respect to students it is crucial for them to actively equip themselves with both disciplinary knowledge and essential soft skills with the aim of enhance their value in the competitive market job. Furthermore, contemplating carefully before choosing a subject in university also plays an integral part in their way to find jobs. Last but not least, universities and the education system ought to change the way of teaching and studying in order to enhance the educational outcome and be able to provide the society with a highly qualified workforce.
To sum up, in my pint of view, the shortage of skills accompanied by the unsuitability of students with their fields can exert a negative influence on students’ career, which is likely to lead to unemployment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2508361204 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10588017315 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632107023411 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3409920001 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.833333333 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134060878738 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04517179484 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428274489304 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735975198149 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300518983612 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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