Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?
It is sometimes suggested that the authority should be responsible for providing funding for artists on the grounds that they earn a little amount of money. Nonetheless, I am totally against this idea as it is awfully wrong headed.
At the outset, there is no denying artists can reap a lot of benefits from many non profit organizations or international companies which value their genuine talent in the field of art. These organizations can make a great contribution to their career prospects by means of providing them career opportunities and market their work and ideas across the world at many famous auctions. This definitely makes it much easier for them to get a basic income to afford their daily needs. For instance, the Global art organization, a non profit organization for art and nature supply a medium to help people who have an avid for art work.
Another note worthy point is that nowadays, artists are likely to find it much easier and convenient to seek for a job, especially working online. This is due to the fact that there is an upsurge in the demand for creative people. In all probability, thanks to the development of technology, artists will be capable of working online as a motion graphics designer, a logo designer or an illustrator. Not only does this help them to be able to make money in distinct ways but it also provides them golden chances to gain deeper understanding, get more experience by means of doing different jobs as well as working with people from all over the world.
To sum up, I think it is not essential for artists to receive financial help from the government.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: NOTE_WORTHY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'noteworthy'?
Suggestion: noteworthy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, so, well, for instance, i think, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79642857143 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79379779556 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8588357271 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.090909091 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237757037673 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855125851194 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463196268851 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143312775058 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00408515669417 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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