Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?
Some people reckon that companies should be required to hire female workers into manager positions since even though the workforce in many developed countries is mostly female, positions which play an integral part of companies are still filled mostly by men. I strongly disagree as I would contend that both men and women are bright applicants for these high positions, that is if they meet certain requirements posted by companies.
On the one hand, men are suitable for the top position in enterprises. To begin with, the male is mentally and physically capable of handling stresses in the workplace. The reason for this is that men do not often share their thoughts and feelings when working, in other words, they kept their problems for themselves and work it out without any assistance. Additionally, since men tend to sort out their difficulties on their own, this train them to be decisive when making a decision. As a result, companies can benefit from this characteristic of men whenever they face an urgent time. Finally, men are born risk-taker, they do not hesitate or fear whenever it comes to innovating.
On the other hand, the female can have an equally significant role as male when it comes to managing. Firstly, women are more intellectually advanced than men from an early age, and this helps them to obtain a lot of real experience. So having a well-paid job and progress rapidly in their career will be easier for women than men. Secondly, women are famous for their interpersonal skills which are the most essential skills that a manager need. Bare that in mind, the female is excellent in diplomacy, thus helping the company to flourish with profit.
In conclusion, both male and female can be suitable candidates for the manager position only if they earn it by meeting the requirements.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96405228758 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74097301335 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3491697662 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260629250527 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793038771552 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910053524672 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166147947545 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136106141969 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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