In many major cities around the globe the amount of traffic is increasing
What do you think are the causes of this?
Can you suggest some possible solutions?
From the second half of last century increased traffic has been one of the problems troubling metropolitan areas of the world. Year by year this modern issue is getting worse, forcing city-dwellers to spend their time in traffic jams. Personally, I think there are a few obvious ways to deal with this problem,if only the main causes are identified.
If we begin with reasons, I will underline acouple of them. First and more obvious one is increasing of population. From the beginning of last century population of our planet has increased fourfold. What is more important, just over half of those people live in cities, which in turn leads to overpopulation in those areas. So every day, people have to move throughout the city by their private cars in narrow roads. If we add here layout of modern cities, where prestige of city is measured by how tall its building are, problem will get clear. Although tall buildings can solve the overpopulation, as they accommodate more people, the roads are still have their traffic limit. So in peak times when people are going work, tension is guaranteed. Another factor I should mention here is improving of lifestyle. Definitely nowadays people could earn more money than they used to. To that end, everyone, even a middle class worker, can afford buying a car.
Having said that, I tend to think there are several measures which could be taken. Putting limit on car ownership for each family would be a great idea to start with. In some big cities, since they offer good job opportunities, families can own several cars, which leads to the problems mentioned earlier. In this case, if certain laws are introduced, each family will have to own only one car, so it could take some pressure off. Secondly, as was mentioned above, authorities could concentrate on peak times, when everyone is on road. Here I would recommend adding some variety on starting hours of universities, schools and other kind of companies. In other words, there is no rule that forces us to start working day at 9:00 PM. In this case, each company or organization could start its work between 8:00 PM to 10:00 PM extending the pick hours by doing so.
To conclude, increased traffic is the problem that has been following us in every developed part of the world. I think it is high time for us to deal with it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, i think, kind of, in other words, to start with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76543209877 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57375401391 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582716049383 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4484365068 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4166666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133974689253 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343384488882 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274647197158 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874362806457 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295539602596 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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