Many museum charges for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum outweigh the disadvantages?
The various museums have been situated around the world so It had stored difference survival things of ancient and traditional. Most of the archaeologist trying to do many types of research and find out the traditional civilization of dead. Consequently, every movement, new findings added to the museums. However, some museums took some money for admission and others are free of charge. It has a plethora of pros and cons. But, I believe that can get many advantages of charging people for entrance to museums rather than disadvantages.
Furthermore, I glad to say, I have a plethora of reasons for positively for this assertion. Firstly, the museum wants to money for maintaining and it is a visiting place hence, employees of the museum have to keep attractively and systematic way in that place. For this, every day they essential money for supporting museum otherwise the museum have to depend on the government where is low conducted place. Most of the government despite payment for maintaining. Therefore, the Museum had been earned income through charged for admission. Secondly, pay for the salary in the museum's employees through the museum. Every museum in every country have been many workers and guardians of the museum have to pay their salaries. If museum charge for entering then they could pay their wage from the museum while they did not want to depend on government because it was earned income.
On the other side, If the museum charged for entering more expensive cost then some poor people could not visit the museum. Indeed, withing charging, workers may be doing illegal activities.
To sum up, considering the above paragraph, I can clearly say, It has a lot of benefits rather than drawbacks. Hence, The museum charge for admission was more important greater than entering free.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06688963211 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72888385291 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0139742826 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467561666162 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15098018093 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111567285641 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28327996077 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478697873393 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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