Recently the issue of foreigners mostly visiting the historical sites which are btourist centers than the indigenes do, has brought slot of attention. And the causes of this is very obvious and needs to be amend.
Firstly the problem of familiarity with the tourist center has made the people not to be attracted to the historical places because they know everything and all the stories behind each item in the museum, so the view of visiting the area visiting is no longer necessary for them .
Secondly the increase of ticket fare In the area discourages the one's that tried going there. For example in Nigeria people struggle to feed themselves due to the bad economy of the country that is even getting worse by the day, so many tourist center increase their entrance fee in other to make more earns in order to meet up. The" Obudu cattle ranch " for example charge much gate fee and cable car fee to take up the mountain, people in that vicinity do not go there but only foreigners.
Finally these problems can be adhered to ,if only certain measures are taking .the issue of over familiarity of these tourist centers / museums, the owners should at least edify the place by projecting the artifacts outside the place and also modernize the things they use for example if the artifacts are been displayed barely they can package it by putting it inside a transparent glass. then issue of increment of ticket fare , the discount should be given to the indigenes of the country in order to attract the local populations to visit the historical sites, so that the younger generation will be able to visit and add to their knowledge of what they already know.
In conclusion historical sites are mostly hosted by foreigners than the local populations do but these problems can be addressed if the government adhered to the solutions stated above in order to attract the attention of the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, at least, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79635258359 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4979524203 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550151975684 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9464660725 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.333333333 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5555555556 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334475240535 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117897678243 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752104393709 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171408282813 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591604401509 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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