Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no doubt that museums play a crucial role in imparting knowledge regarding various cultures and traditions of different nations. While there are many advantages of putting a price on tickets by the museum authorities, we should also consider the drawbacks of this action. I do not completely agree with the views and would support my explanation with relevant examples.
On the one hand, it is beneficial for the museum governing bodies to price a ticket for viewers. This is because, the valued art and artifacts need regular maintenance and new additions, which can conveniently be done by the collected money. For example, according to a report published in the New York Times newspaper in 2011, it highlighted the mesmerizing array of the displayed arts and sculptures in the city museum, which was possible by help of ticket money and generous donations. In contrast, many spectators are unable to afford the unpredictable hiked ticket prices. As a result, the purpose of museum to provide recreation and impart knowledge is defeated.
On the other hand, galleries tend to hike ticket prices according to their needs. The reason is that, many of the museums are owned by private companies, which exploit their powers without providing any justification. For instance, there was a protest in the New York city couple of years ago, regarding and unexpected rise in admission charges for the city museum. As a result, even the scholars from the State University College of Arts were not able to get into the museum for core academic purposes. However, the museum governance needs to set rules and regulations monitoring the ticket prices for the benefit of art as well as people. Although, I believe that erratic changes done in ticket prices can be controlled and monitored by a countries’ government.
In conclusion, while the advantages of paying price for ticket is more as compared to drawbacks, I believe regulations should be set so that people are not financially exploited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12804878049 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90269521312 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4169381434 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.133333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287221548409 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893709635929 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713792867581 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162480500291 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476178459278 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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