Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you thing the advantages of charging people for admission into museums outweigh the disadvantage?
Museums often impose an entrance fee on visitors. In my opinion, I think charging for such visits has more benefits than any drawbacks it may bring.
Despite of the probable drawbacks, I believe charged educational experiences have more advantages. One major benefit of imposing charges is that it generates revenue. This makes maintenance of the exhibitions more convenient, ensuring a quality experience. Priced visits instill the idea of investing on educational experiences and prioritizing them equally. Many youngsters, for instance, may not take interest in a free museum visit, but learning that a price is being paid may motivate them to learn from this. Lastly, free facilities are often not valued by people, imposing charges reduces the number of uninterested visitors and ensures a more enriching experience for those who are actually interested.
Admittedly, there are some problems that may arise from charged museum visits. One drawback this rule may have is on the youngsters, who are already least interested in history and may drift further away if these visits are charged. Another negative impact may be on the small fraction of the community who can not afford to spend on museum visits and this could be taken as an act of discrimination towards the less affording individuals.
In conclusion, financial sufficiency and facilitating a quality learning experience for people far outweighs any of the drawbacks that may result from imposing a fee on museum visitors.
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Suggestion:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36016949153 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95504901963 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0209651897 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.416666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192436200346 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766083066134 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05468308516 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131613757248 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349096087189 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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