Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission into museums outweigh the disadvanatages?
Museums often impose an entrance fee on visitors. In my opinion, I think charging for such visits has more benefits than any drawbacks it may bring.
Despite of the few probable drawbacks, I believe charged educational experiences have more advantages. One major benefit of imposing charges is that it generates revenue. This makes maintenance of the exhibitions more convenient, ensuring a quality experience. Priced visits instill the idea of investing on educational experiences and prioritizing them equally. Many youngsters, for instance, may not take interest in a free museum visit, but learning that a price is being paid may motivate them to learn from this. Lastly, free facilities are often not valued by people, imposing charges reduces the number of uninterested visitors and ensures a more enriching experience for those who are actually interested.
Admittedly, there are some problems that may arise from charged museum visits. One drawback this regulation may have is on the youngsters , who are already least interested in history and may drift further away if these visits are charged. Another negative impact may be on the small fraction of the community who enjoy free museums as centers of recreation, these individuals usually belong to the less affording proportion of the population and imposing charges may be seen as an act of discrimination towards the less affording people of the society and create a feeling of inferiority. For instance, the increment in the entrance fee of the Madam Tussaud's museum, faced great criticism from local visitors who often enjoyed the experience and thought this fare was a unfair burden imposed by the authorities.
In conclusion, financial sufficiency and facilitating a quality learning experience for people far outweighs any of the drawbacks that may result from imposing a fee on museum visitors.
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, lastly, may, so, still, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37074829932 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95463351972 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8232236826 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.461538462 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216221579385 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838313383136 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538517163169 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153952826617 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151049250519 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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