In modern days, one of the controversial issues related to why some museums charge entrance fee while others have not the payment. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from adverse and benefits of view. I will consider the disadvantage of free entrance for museums and then secondly a possibility to help the development of a museum.
On one side of the argument, there are people who claim that museums keep brilliant exhibits of nations without the fee. The primary reason for believing this is that whereas clients show by the free, museums spent a great amount of money for such services as security, the electricity and like that. It is also possible to argue that to solve this situation, the museum should take charge from people who come there. One important illustration of this is in 1972, the national museum of a Philippine had become an organization that has payment because that museum had problems of the economy.
Nevertheless, another angle on this debate suggests that having a payment has much efficient to improve museums and exhibits. Moreover, increasing the tariff of a museum has the advantage to raise the value of such exhibit as paintings, manuscripts, and sculptures. To further understand, that all museums need to have fee is good for the development of the activity of museums. A particularly good example is here Hermitage museum that is one of the most famous museums has a high payment because they believe that showing exhibits like a precious must be high payment associated with the level of exhibits.
In conclusion, I mean museums better to have payment because having a fee has much advantageous. As we have seen, this essay argued about benefit outweigh adverse of having a fee.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90443686007 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79142499259 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542662116041 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5450741371 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266451526275 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105519904805 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480678732611 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151914519308 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712065565454 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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