many museums charge for admission while others are free.
do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
some museums are chargeable on entry for individuals. Although, there are some questions on this rule, in my opinion, the drawbacks for entrance are eclipsed by its benefits. The income can be ploughed back into operation and development of the museums.
The major disadvantage of entry fee for museum is a possibility of reducing the number of visitors. Most individuals are not very enthusiastic about entering into museums, charging fee might reduce the interest even further. In addition, museums are a great way of showing the culture to the poor, who often are not able to attend schools. Putting an entry fee limits the education that a country can provide to its economically backward individuals.
Granted an admission, might have a negative impact on the number of people visiting, but it surely uplifts the people maintaining and operating the museums. museums feature educational exhibitions at times, and this could not have been done without a sum of money expended on hiring professionals and buying equipment. even more, there are a lot of people employed within museums. providing salary to them can only be possible if museums have certain funding.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of an admission fee for the museums overcome the free entry considering all aspects of the development of museums.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27830188679 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95011252961 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3837615097 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226837807956 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827887941973 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771465106978 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14834719248 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634340162684 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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