Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
A great number of criminals break the law again after being released. The causes of that are both in the penitentiary system and in our society. Therefore the solution to the problem involves prison reforms and social schemes of rehabilitation.
Firstly, one of the main reasons why people reoffend is that prisons do not redeem criminals, but only punish them. This system does not help criminals to acquire moral values and develop skills which will be useful in their after-prison lives. Instead, prisoners are surrounded by hardened criminals who teach them their views and criminal business. Secondly, after serving their sentences, offenders have difficulty returning to normal life. There is a lot of prejudice against ex-prisoners in terms of employment. As a result, jobless people commit new crimes to survive. Moreover, after prison, they find it hard to renew social connections and establish ties with other people, while criminal communities are always happy to welcome them.
However, there are several ways to tackle the problem of reoffending. To begin with, prisons have to be reformed. It would be a good idea to introduce psychological counselling to identify and eradicate the psychological cause of crime and educational programs to give them an opportunity to earn money honestly. In addition, there should be some social rehabilitation programs to help ex-criminals to find jobs and build healthy relationships with people.
In conclusion, this problem can be solved only if it is approached from two sides - from within and from outside the prison.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...penitentiary system and in our society. Therefore the solution to the problem involves pr...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom within and from outside the prison.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, honestly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36144578313 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93587193181 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658634538153 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.6516773038 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176975400671 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555126468371 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430356833392 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102697963528 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236208437488 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.