An increasing number of teenagers involved in criminal activity has raised concerns in many countries nowadays. It would be various social problems causes this rise in juvenile crime. However, there are a few solutions that promise to put an end to this issue.
First, violence in the media can affect young people’s attitudes and behaviors because in adolescence, children are often very susceptible to cognitive effects and easy to learn wrongdoing. For instance, the boys love watching Conan, a well-known anime from Japan, admire the character of super thief Kid, he follows and stole money from his parents to play video games- according to new reports about juvenile delinquency. Second, lack of parental guidance can lead teenagers to delinquency. A study from Psychology has shown that teenagers who don’t know what they like, have no direction about the future are more easily seduced by outside than other children. From my point of view, the main reason for it was they lack of attention from their parents and teacher.
Several solutions could be taken to mitigate these problems. For minor crimes, families and schools should be reminded detain and suspend for a period of time. Its give children the opportunity to become a better version. For youngters committing serious crimes that dangerous to other people, it should be received adult punishment. Teenagers are fully aware of their actions and know the rules of society. Moreover, juveniles need to know that the law is serious and that punishment is a good way to teach them this.
In conclusion, the growth of crimes among teenagers creates negative impacts on society and individuals. Therefore, this issue must be tackled to prevent further damage to future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21631205674 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66247832015 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0747708653 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247803465145 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693914054903 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408047677776 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136572574524 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399608502023 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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