In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is the case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?
In the world of today, crime related issues are clearly something that is often discussed in this era and it is also irrefutable fact that teenager and children are became criminal. In this essay, I will critique some reason which is associate with this trend and suggest some ways to punish small age criminal.
To embark on, there are several reasons why such trend is being observed. First and foremost, advancement in technology is major reason for this because of children are more active on internet and they look amount of ways of crime as well as also learn how to remove evidence of crime. In addition to this, people of today are more engage with their work so that, they cannot monitor properly their child. Furthermore, these days, trend of nuclear family is active. For this reason, lack of advice situation occurred from children grandparents and this also lead committing crime phenomenon.
There are several methods to give punishment of children and teenagers who committed crime. Firstly, the government should charge some fine to children parents and give last warning to them therefore, they become aware and imposed restriction on their children. Secondly, the government built some prisons for teenager and when they commit crime, give punishment of some years prison. Thirdly, various government facilities like garden and old age home where assign criminal as worker and give some beneficial advice for their future life.
By way of conclusion, number of reasons are available for this situation and both the government and parents are only ways to give punishment to criminal children of teenager.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: become
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Suggestion: years'; year's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15849056604 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51981114415 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57358490566 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8881153237 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267435344292 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107822693214 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0949097995493 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149017107511 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487430544779 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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