In many parts of the world, people are relying more and more on prepared food from grocery stores or restaurants because they are too busy to cook at home. This is a bad idea because home-cooked food is much better for us.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Food industry shows a great bloom in today's world because of the development of transportation system for foods and various ways of processing foods to expand the expire date. It is reflecting the situation more people do not have enough time for cooking in daily lives because working population is increasing. However, I find it the shift unfavorable. I believe that in most cases prepared foods on grocery stores or restaurants are not as healthy as homemade meals. Also, the habit of eating out discourages the understanding of what we eat.
Firstly, prepared foods often contains many addictives, and tend to be slated and sweetened so strongly that consumers find them tasty at their first bite. Deep-fried dishes or fatty foods are always popular in restaurants, which may result in heat diseases. Furthermore, diabetes is now widely spreading because of corn syrup used in more processed sweets and drinks.
If we cook in a house, we can prevent them. At the same cost as a fast food meal, a nutricious and well-balanced meal can be made.
Secondly, eating out and eating foods bought means we eat foods unconsciously about what we are really eating. It is because the foods are highly processed, and we cannot know what is used for flavoring from a glance. The poor understanding about what we eat attributes to poor knowledge to choose healthy meals whereas it is crucially needed in the modern world with a variety of food option whether it is healthy or unhealthy.
There is a social situation we tend to rely on prepared foods because of less time for cooking. It is important to promote healthy eating through home cooking again so that people can be aware of how foods are cooked and what ingredients are used to be healthy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89597315436 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74957359385 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4143393899 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311435862988 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101961414981 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628891297313 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174770546478 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775684635476 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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