More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
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These days,more and more people use many kinds of apparatuses in order to communicate with each other regardless of social or personal scenes. Occasionally,people choose to use technology rather than meeting face to face.
There are some advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
First, thanks to these equipments, people can contact easily without worrying about time or places. For example, SNS applications make it possible to get or send information and things they need to tell easily no matter they are or what they are doing
In addition, information or contents which are delivered through technology can be checked many times in the case that they are preserved as pictures or texts.
However, there are some disadvantages of technology. Technological tools are not useful to understand how the opponents feel or think. People understand others feeling through behavior, tone of voice, and facial expression. Most of these equipment do not deliver detailed information. Technology does not detail these types of emotions and such, which has a risk of leading to mutual misunderstandings or disputes.
Technological equipments are convenient for communicating, but we have to pay attention to whether the proper expressions are being used to avoid misunderstandings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , people
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Suggestion:
...o matter they are or what they are doing In addition, information or contents whi...
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Message: Did you mean 'this equipment' or 'these equipments'?
Suggestion: this equipment; these equipments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62814070352 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40239971641 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663316582915 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6220296677 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.818181818 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321712336874 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127973571431 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138892676821 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183162970036 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141045292692 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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