In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin.
Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effect they have in terms of health on society ?
Whitening products are not unusual anymore, moreover, it is becoming a product which abundant of people very familiar with and being influenced by others to try it. Therefore, these products, which are mostly originally produced in either Korea or China, receive a great amount of profit in the recent times. However, although it is one of the top products, it also has several effect in terms of health on society.
There are some reasons why people decided to make such products and advertise it to others. People are born with different skin tone, some accept their skin colour, but some do not. Besides, there are also some people who grow up with uneven skin tone in different parts of their body. This problem give so much difficulty towards people, especially women. They tend to feel insecure and shy if those certain parts are being exposed to public. Therefore, to overcome it, they willing to try the whitening product. Many people believe that, using this sort of product, can lighten your skin within days and also can boost someone’s feeling, they can feel more confident and can be accepted in society as they are not peculiar anymore.
However, some people, especially scientists, found that in the ingredients, which are contained inside the product, can be harmful to people’s skin. Those ingredients are chemical based, not all chemical elements are safe for skin. For people who do not really have enough knowledge on safe ingredients, they might just purchase any products that can whiten their skin, in fact, they can get skin cancer because of that, or less severe effects, such as rash, redness, or feel stingy on skin.
Overall, if one want to try the product, they must understand the ingredients that are contained inside and purchase it in trusted shop to prevent any harmful effects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, in fact, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99344262295 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4422246347 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570491803279 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0964912141 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33941955483 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106451044513 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057797460134 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180516990148 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684457919933 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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