In many parts of the world water sources are becoming more polluted. discuss the problems and the solutions?
Water, which is vital part of our existence, is contaminated due to reckless waste dumping straight into water resources. Long-term polluting has own negative impact on environment which I'm going to reduce in this essay.
Probably the most noteworthy damage inflicted to marine habitat because of humans' ignorance. Dolphins, fishes are dyeing in row due to lack of oxygen and pureness that was not trained only few centuries ago. Second notable detrimental aftermath is disruption of food chain and forest habitat loss. From mammals to predators in wildlife cannot drink river or lake water because reservoir became a dump. Finally, we can see how diseases become more frequent these days.
Turning to possible solutions, supervise the place where factory releases their remains should occur and government should demand a report with signature to make sure in safety of country water. Another measure we can give is fellow citizens' about trained water in a long run. That would probably prevent exacerbation by either deliberate or unconscious dropping litter in rivers and lakes because some people might think that their garbage would not cause a global issue. It will not indeed but this is only matter of number of like-minded humans. Finally, animals that are close to extinction could be put under surveillance by green collars and volunteers, who would be checking near water on cleanness.
In conclusion, contamination of water which is caused by absence of official reports and mankind's ignorance perhaps could be countered by government authorities. Reminding the essentially of pure water to country residents an entering a special need to know each landfill used by factories should be provided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34686346863 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73178892217 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70110701107 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2743434663 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10563594965 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032876518958 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379557075669 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627098911136 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158960003144 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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