It is argued that global tourism makes people living in destination resorts displeasing. In addition to some reasons for this view, solutions to change hostile view towards international tourism will be given in this essay.
There are several reasons why local residents consider global tourism as a cause of some serious problems in their countries. The first reason is that a host of foreign tourists may increase a level of pollution in their destinations. The more foreigners arrive, the more rubbish is thrown out, and when foreign travelers dispose of rubbish in the unsuitable place without the disregard for surrounding environment, it have a negative impact on environment. Another reason is that it may have an adverse impact on traditional customs and indigenous practices because tourists may not learn about local culture and do act as they live in their countries. For example, some Western people visiting some sacred places such pagodas and temples in Vietnam may wear extremely sexy clothes, or laugh too hard, which make local inhabitants feel unpleasant or have an undesirable impact on some local young’s outlook.
Some measures must be taken by governments and international bodies to change negative attitudes. Firstly, economic benefits for local destination resorts should be more promoted through official media. The development of tourism industry is accompanied by more jobs created in service industry such as hotel staff and tourist guide. It is essential for tourism agencies to boost campaigns to raise tourists’ awareness of environmental protection while paying a visit. Furthermore, customs and practices ought to be attached special importance to popularize them. For instance, volunteers may be arranged in travel places to talk to foreigners about their local regulations and cultural features.
In conclusion, negative attitudes can be changed by taking above suggestions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66440677966 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91788608044 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0779940497 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.25 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185465247065 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783952877504 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597322509435 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509591671613 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514454349946 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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