Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook)
have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree?
Social networking sites, for instance Facebook, are thought by some to have had a
detrimental effect on individual people as well as society and local communities.
However, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I
agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities.
With regards to individuals, the impact that online social media has had on each
individual person has clear advantages. Firstly, people from different countries are
brought together through such sites as Facebook whereas before the development
of technology and social networking sites, people rarely had the chance to meet or
communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle or community.
Secondly, Facebook also has social groups which offer individuals a chance to meet
and participate in discussions with people who share common interests.
On the other hand, the effect that Facebook and other social networking sites have
had on societies and local communities can only be seen as negative. Rather than
individual people taking part in their local community, they are instead choosing
to take more interest in people online. Consequently, the people within local
communities are no longer forming close or supportive relationships. Furthermore,
society as a whole is becoming increasingly disjointed and fragmented as people
spend more time online with people they have never met face to face and who they
are unlikely to ever meet in the future.
To conclude, although social networking sites have brought individuals closer
together, they have not had the same effect on society or local communities. Local
communities should do more to try and involve local people in local activities in
order to promote the future of community life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 25, column 31, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...s. Local communities should do more to try and involve local people in local activitie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52877697842 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87081235605 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.389654019 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.727272727 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5454545455 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30001572444 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129789232521 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639976042505 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883642192168 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657415287029 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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