Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that teachers should avoid giving homework to pupils, whereas there are some who believe that homework is the crucial part of educational system. In my opinion, although not having homework can give students more time for practical activities, homework is important to build a sense of responsibility in them. This essay is going to look on the both sides and then will decide which approach is best.
On the one hand, in the absence of homework pupils will have more time to do practical skills, such as communication and problem solving. Keeping in mind the needs of current job market, these skills are more valuable than academic studies. For example, a recent survey done by Pakistan government showed that about 50 percent of university graduates are unemployable because they lack necessary job skills.
On the other hand, critics argue that homework is a key component of education because it develops a sense of responsibility among students which is a necessary thing to have. It is a common saying that a responsible man is a successful man because it does not matter how talented you are, if you are not striving for your goal then you cannot achieve it. To illustrate, one of my friends has achieved first position in his bachelor’s degree despite the fact he was not intelligent instead he had put extra hard work in his studies.
In conclusion, having practical skills is no doubt valuable to get a job and absence of homework can give more time to master them but the sense of responsibility is the key component to get success and it can only be attained by doing homework.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, then, whereas, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83512544803 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80728689328 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.4531060356 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.9 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177475526725 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667451468359 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070054715144 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11199247899 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743921071566 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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