Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, social networking was grown up and many people believe it have a huge negative impact for society and individuals. Unhesitatingly, I have been in agreement for prefer to support this statement that social media has negative impress.
In the one hand, it is important for community to beware against of social media which was popular these days such as Facebook, Instagram, twitter and others by reason of there are many contents unfeasible. Taking the Facebook as an example, people with internet addiction surely trended to holding the smart phone for too long. they goof off their time for online and engaged with realm by theirselves. negatives contents as though pornography or acts of violence which was spread out by irresponsibility people. social media has aim to make humans connected each other. Initiate from society which had an expect to be exist, therefore they employ to pursuits attentions such as distributes photos by theirselves in personal timeline and composes the depressed stories in order to achieves excessively thumbs up from other users.
On the other hand, the prevalented of social network has an immense advantages. Based on the first goal why the creator developed these applications, those are give the information and render the simplify communication to people in the world. Public may use any platform of social networking for free to find news, old friends, new friends, partners and other. Also, they can sell their products, exploit for marketing, become an influencers for agent of change, share the works, articles, illustration music, opinion and certainly worthwhile to community.
To conclude, I depend about networking sites of social media be able to impairs the mental health of someone if they cannot split moments between offline and online seeing that these measures are disparate. people necessary to socialize with other and build the real communication or discussion to evade the misapprehension.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35483870968 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89397091172 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632258064516 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2220452078 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205116204415 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725184717422 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776746952133 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13820644052 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841980986957 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.