Many people had been involved in sports as children, but do not do any physical exercise as adults. What are the reasons for people avoide physical exercise. How to overcome this trend and motivate to be more physically active?
It is universally acknowledged that sports play a vital role to uplift the standard of health, wealth and relationship. Presently,. majority of youngsters neglect outdoor activities despite it has umpteen amount of advantages. There are are plethora of causes behind this trend and it could be lucrative to inspire them to indulge in outdoor sports. Here, I would like to account for causes and remedies of this working concern.
There are many four reasons behind this phenomenon. First and the foremost, nowadays young blood spend their time while playing indoor games due to advancement in technology. To illustrate, youngster are passionate to use electronic gadgets such as mobile phone, computer, laptop for getting amusement and young masses do not have sufficient time to take part in sports activities owing to they use electronic equipments around the clock and therefore the ratio of physical exercise is at low ebb . What is more, unlike adolescents, youngsters have to take many paramount responsibilities in adult age and therefore they avert physical exercise in their life. To demonstrate, young people have to step out for earning money in order to support financially to their family. Thus, young blood are unable to find quality time for their physical activities.
Numerous remedies can be overcome this occurrence. Initially, trainers and parents both are play vital role to reduce this menace. To justify, this is the prime duty of both guardians and teachers to incite adults toward less use of gadgets and tell them the importance of outdoor games. Thence, they can stay fit as fiddle while playing physical exercise. Apart from it, legal bodies and school authorities must organised events time to time to get motivated the young people towards sports. that youngsters can perform outdoor games.
To recapitulate, undeniably, in this competitive era youngblood toil hard to become success in their life which neglect them to play physical exercise. However, I still believe that, playing outdoor sports allow individuals to earn name and fame as well as to show their talent and at world wide level and therefore they can get optimum opportunities to travel abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, such as, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27065527066 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77242453638 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578347578348 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4164052692 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.777777778 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240790187726 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672655515358 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051057175378 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123882383603 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659657089175 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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