Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

Essay topics:

Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.

What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

One of the biggest challenge in our modern world is eating healthy food every day. People are struggling to keep up with healthy diet and active life style, which is causing major impact on their physical as well as mental health. This essay will discuss some of the major reasons for the dietary problem and how easily we can handle this issue with some simple life changes.

Everyone is occupied with busy life style due to their work and personal commitments. People are ready to eat whatever food is available without much difficulty such as frozen foods, junk foods, etc.,
Number of fast food restaurants have increased rapidly in the last 10 years all over the major cities. These restaurants offer variety of unhealthy and high calorie food choices like sugary drinks, fried foods at nominal price. In addition, healthy food is very high priced compared to unhealthy choices. Specifically fresh fruits and nutritious vegetables are very expensive.

Home cooked food is one of the best solution to avoid unhealthy lifestyle. People should start to focus and spend time on what they eat. Self cooking makes healthy food affordable. Also, the government should increase the tax on unhealthy food and also make sure healthy food is affordable for all citizens by making some policy changes. Apart from eating healthy, everyone must exercise by spending least 30 minutes daily for activities such as walking, running, etc.,

To conclude, one should focus on their health before it deteriorates. Start home cooking as part of daily chores and spend less number of days eating outside. Government also should help and support the citizens to maintain a healthy lifestyle. These simple steps will help in maintaining healthy diet and active life style.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12152777778 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.401871919 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600694444444 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7782190697 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159200502575 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511773427849 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493778858342 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845942472917 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517201804454 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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