Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:
- Give details about the course
- Describe what equipment you will need for the course
- Ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to let you know that my corporation is going to have a special training course. I need to find the appropriate place to have this section and decide your conference centre is the best place to choose.
Firstly, I would like you to explain the details in terms of the section that we will have. Currently, my company recruits the number of new employees and the employer decides them to train for workplace. We are going to do the lecture to educate new candidates how to work effectively when they start the first day of work.
I need to suggest what sort of devices is required for the day. As I mentioned, I will have the presentation so, I need a microphone to speak and a huge screen to show the data for the potential employees because I will bring my laptop and it will be connected with the screen you offer.
I also have some questions about the facilities. I would like to know that the centre has a dinning room because we might have a lunch break and I need to provide some finger foods for the course. Once the lunch time is done, some cleaning tools such as vacuum may be requested because we are going to clean all the space that we use for the break. I appreciate if you reply the questions.
Your sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, sort of, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4309623431 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46726436119 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55230125523 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5311435833 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171553980145 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652566625399 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627326865124 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10527733476 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100592535179 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.