Some people say that the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
It is often that money is always necessary to live our life essentially. Some people might think that the major method to make the lifestyle better is to earn a plenty of dollars. This essay will address the perspective how can having lots of money become people’s life happy and suggest the alternative ways.
First of all, it does happen to live very happy and blissful lifestyle when people have an abundance of money. In other words, people might be able to do everything they desire in reality because they would enjoy their leisure time sufficiently. For example, individuals may have unique and extreme sports as a hobby like water skiing around their luxury house because it is not easy to experience with the lack of cash and also, the expensive house can be purchased by a lot of budget. Thus, their dreams come true to be happy when they have plentiful budget.
On the other hand, there are some different things that possibly make life happier. The healthy life cannot be bought by dollars because it is the resource of the nature whereas, the money does not exist naturally. Furthermore, true love is also not affected such as the preciousness of the family because there are no conditions when parents love their children. Therefore, the cash is not the only factor which makes people’s life happy in the world.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that earning a lot of salary would be the best choice to become better lifestyle, there are other ways to be happy. Individuals might also take care of the methods which are as important as money.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77655677656 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45044815463 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553113553114 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0532222491 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.307692308 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482141615538 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158708356931 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101257596144 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279547912476 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108702425233 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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