There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it.
In your letter, you should:
describe the event
explain why you think he/she would be interested in it
suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her.
Dear Emma,
I am writing this letter to let you know that there will be a festival showing up in my society. I guess you might be interested to participate it.
Firstly, I need to explain what it is. To be honest, it is related to a music event that perfoms the number of musicians singing latin songs and there are many things to enjoy such as selling singers goods.
I want to describe the reason why I assume that you are excited to attend it. The other day, we talked about the favourite music genre each other and realised that we have a similarity which is we both like latin music, so I decided to go there with you when I noticed this event coming at the first time.
I would like to give an idea to meet there with you. You may take the bus off to downtown and then we go to the place together because I well-known how to reach there very quickly. All you have to do is brining your bus pass and some cash because we are going to have some food there. It will be very exciting to enjoy.
Best regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, may, so, then, well, i guess, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21608040201 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12568159881 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5180117987 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280105785818 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961145475544 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616586268564 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154936134724 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731045884794 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.