Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problem?
It is true that nowadays rich people are getting even richer and poor people have become poorer especially in developing countries. Although the problem associated with this situation can be pronounced, they are not without solutions.
There are a number of problems caused by wealth inequality. Firstly, the increasing cost of high-quality medicine, education and simply healthy lifestyle, daily food that make life more difficult for the poor people. For example, they can not buy good quality food and prefer to save money by buying junk food that leads to unhealthy lifestyle and obesity. Secondly, poverty can have a profound and destructive impact on a child. In fact, children’s of poorer parents are often not able to access higher education then leading to a lack of knowledge and no future.
Nevertheless, there have been many good solutions for wealth inequality. Firstly, governments should provide financial support for people who are living under uncomfortable financial circumstances. By providing the poor with such resources, it will allow for them to increase for them to increase in overall happiness, more so than if the money was used to benefit the rich. Secondly, governments should ensure the quality of education to all of the children. In fact, the education opportunity can play a huge role to develop children’s future as well as help them a good job.
In conclusion, although wealth inequality can cause a whole host social issues, there are still many practical solutions. By adjusting education policies, the government can be a decent contributor to a fairer society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ould ensure the quality of education to all of the children. In fact, the education opport...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30859375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98649865132 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59765625 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0371621304 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211614628553 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699864841101 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086312155962 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153520408502 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136372184851 0.056905535591 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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