Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home. Do you agree or disagree ?
It is true that children can broaden their knowledge and skills through TV programs. I partly agree that children should watch TV regularly
On the one hand, there are different reasons why children should watch TV for pursuing higher education. Firstly, interesting TV programs can draw inspiration and easy access the world of knowledge. For example, some shows and channels, such as Discovery and Ted.com, they offer educational programs that can increase children’s knowledge and make them more aware of the world around us. Secondly, teenagers can not only enlarge their knowledge but also develop their soft skills through some TV channels. In fact, when watching a speaker they can learn how to be confident in front of the crowd.
On the other hand, there are various disadvantages for children watching TV regularly. One reason is that children who addicted to television, it will easily spoil their valuable time. For example, children can waste time on TV shows instead of focusing their homework and going out for entertain. Furthermore, when people spend too much time for watch programs, it will lead to health problems. For instance, watching TV too much or sitting very close to it may make your eyes tired or give you a headache.
In conclusion, although I accept that watching TV is a good way for children study, I disagree that children should watch TV regularly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09170305677 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70320138448 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585152838428 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7475939596 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42281799591 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168259882365 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114938770191 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323813872138 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843369647899 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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