Many people say that the only way to guarantee to get a good job is to complete a course in university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work.
How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?
Enrolling in the university is considered as the ideal way to have a decent job, while, others believe that it is essential to have a part-time job and participating in an internship program to gain some skills. To some extent, this essay has a similar view with this statement as a job must obtain a degree to be considered professional and starting the job as early as possible have enormously benefit for the people.
It is general knowledge that pursues further education is the only way to secure a job position as it provides one's knowledge and practical skill which could not be achieved by enrolling in non-formal education. Take the doctor and lawyer as an example, without fulfilling all the courses, one could not be as a professional worker. Therefore, I think for a certain profession, the only way to secure a well-paid job is by pursuing further education, so that one could enhance their insight and become a qualified professional.
On the other hand, taking a part-time job while studying in the university could enormously benefit, because some of the study programs in the university do not provide sufficient field practice programs so that student lack of some skill requiring in the workplace. Another reason is better for young people to have early exposure to exact working condition while they are studying at the college, so they could gain an experience and learn practical skills.
To sum up, graduating from the university is a must for a certain working area such as law and health. Starting to work as earlier as possible is could bring advantage for the young people due to it could enhance several competencies requiring in the working place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, while, i think, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92605633803 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84136385244 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510563380282 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3930244385 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.444444444 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5555555556 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192293640208 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081712567089 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347722212841 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116500095586 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229673636128 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.