Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle, others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While people used to enjoy a healthier lifestyle in the past, the recent decade have seen a dramatic increase in the rate of diverse ailments people are struggling with. Opinions diverge greatly on whether the government or each individual should assume responsibility to foster the healthy lifestyle. However, I personally believe that both of them share equal importance.
On one hand, no one is of power to enforce an individual to pursue a healthy lifestyle. It seems a matter of personal interest and although needing constant attention, every person in the society should be worried about the dire consequences of not following a healthy diet. Moreover, no rule from any authority can be enforcing citizens to attend a gym or a swimming pool. Each individual, therefore, would be more suitable than anyone else to take the responsibility of going after a healthy lifestyle.
On the other hand governments seem to hold a vital position in providing a healthy lifestyle for the community. Considering these day’s hectic lifestyle, people are more likely to be exposed to deteriorations in their mental and physical health regarding stressful work environment and traffic jam. The governments, though, should try to alleviate the burden which each individual bears to support a living and provide people a more sedentary lifestyle. Undoubtedly, these are measures that can not be taken by anyone else, but the government.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the government and the people alike should assume responsibility to enhance the average standard of living, which leads to a healthier lifestyle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29343629344 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04861402851 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2701129417 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25317758596 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873191587951 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608640097866 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148878707846 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301314974551 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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