Consumption of fast food has increases immensely in last few years. Some people opine that companies should not advertise such unhealthy food items, whereas others argue in favor of rights of speech and freedom for everyone. I believe, everyone has a right to say what they want, it is an individual's choice whether to consume such products and pay attention to such ads or not.
Advertisement is one of the biggest strategy for a company to attract more consumers. Every company has a right to introduce their product in the market through advertisement, regardless of it's negative or positive effect on the people. The ads a company creates are quiet fancy and tempting showing the flavors and images of foods that makes mouth watery. It attracts large number of people, especially young people. For instance, companies like Lays, makes an advert showing packet of chips having surprise toy inside, this attracts children and they end up buying and eating such unhealthy food items.
On the other hand even if the company do not advertise their product, people will not stop eating fast food. As junk food, is delicious to mouth and quick to grab people will be attracted to it any ways. McDonald's is one of the leading food chain in the fast food industry, it mostly serves different variety of burgers and chips, that only contribute to obesity in people. Even though this fact is know by everyone, people still prefers to consume such food by their choice. Also, stopping companies from promoting their product is no ones right.
In conclusion, even though fast food have negative effect on an individuals health, it is ultimately a choice of people whether they want to have it or not. No company is forcing anyone to grab a bite of their food. It is a right of the company to market their food products as everyone has a freedom to speak for themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: known
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
...ket their food products as everyone has a freedom to speak for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83800623053 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52562876757 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529595015576 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5034238522 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308560508524 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108372640604 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709791209581 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201307666757 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290644331751 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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