Many people think hosting as international sporting event is beneficial to a country, while others disagree.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is thought by some that it is advantageous for a country that held international sport events while there are others who argue with this statement. In my opinion, although country spend tremendous amount of money for holding sport events, I consider that worldwide sport events are beneficial for a country as they become more popular.
On the one hand, it is often thought by many people that countries have to spend huge amount of money on preparation works for international sport events. These is because cities are usually do not ready to accept many people, and they have to improve transport system, housing and sport facilities. For example, Russian Federation had to build up many new sport facilities and hotels for short period of time, many private houses were demolished to make a way for new hotels and sport villages.
On the other hand, according to some people, the country might become more popular after such big worldwide sport events, as a result more and more people may visit that countries and spend there their money and I agree. The Country become popular around the world while sport events being held there as many people watch these events on TV and they become familiar for them. For instance, according to recent research there was a 20% increase of tourists who visited Russian Federation after Football world cup event was held there.
In conclusion, although host countries spend huge amount of money in order to prepare for worldwide sport events, I believe that it is beneficial as it helps country to become attractive for many people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94360902256 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46860838564 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488721804511 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.10141664 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 146.111111111 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197889227154 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102907744178 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473250351903 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137585473382 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313232104273 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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