Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all. Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend?
It is irrefutable that a notable quantity of modern citizens, especially the ones from industrialized countries, are having the tendency of giving birth to fewer children when compared to their predecessors. Several other even choose to be childless. From my perspective, this phenomenon results from various causes and can be considered as a positive trend
To initiate, there is a variety of explanations for people to have no interest in becoming parents or have fewer babies. One fundamental justification is due to the modification is the societal structure. There seems to be evidence that the antiquity tends to emphasize more on the human powers, which illustrate through the fact that the most work was accomplished manually. Therefore, people need to have numerous children to fulfil the shortage of labour within a community. Nevertheless, since the current society in the developed world is the intelligent-orientated ones with the manual occupations are gradually being automated, quality, instead of quantity, of labours is now the prerequisite concern. Therefore, a family with many children is no longer necessary.
On the other hand, having fewer or non-children can bring plenty of advantageous impacts on the developed world. The first and foremost benefit is that it can be the first step to solve modern problems. It is not unreasonable to suggest that the majority of nerve-wracking issues such as environmental deterioration or shortage of natural resource are originated from overpopulation. Consequently, having fewer or non-children is synonymous with diminishing the population density and thereby making a great contribution to tackle these aforementioned hassles. Furthermore, parents with fewer offsprings can be better nurturers. By the way of exemplifying, bread-winners in multi-child families allegedly need to spend more time at work in order to have financial sufficiency to foster their children and thereby resulting in the lack of attention and parental guidance
In conclusion, many people are choosing to have fewer or non-children due to the transformation in social structure and this is a good trend as it helps to solve problems related to overpopulation as well as allow parents to be better nurturers
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52312138728 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45510168042 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557803468208 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 109.961148055 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.5 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25002383618 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753620592627 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663830438936 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160511355632 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467974688611 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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