Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all. Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend?
It is irrefutable that a notable quantity of modern citizens, especially the ones from industrialized countries, are having the tendency of giving birth to fewer children when compared to their predecessors. Several other even choose to be childless. From my perspective, this phenomenon results from various causes and can be considered as a positive trend
To initiate, there is a variety of explanations for people to have no interest in becoming parents or have fewer babies. One fundamental justification is that they want to put every possible effort of them into their occupation. It does not seem unreasonable to claim that having babies is synonymous with people need to spend an enormous amount of time within a day taking care of them. Therefore, demanding work schedule which often made modern citizens snowed under heavy workload does not allow them to have numerous children. Furthermore, the negativity from the workplace may have profound impacts on the relationship of one, hence they are tying the know later in life. Hence, it is understandable that these people will have a low birth rate
On the other hand, having fewer or non-children can bring plenty of advantageous impacts on the developed world. The first and foremost benefit is that it can be the first step to solve modern problems. There seems to be evidence that the majority of nerve-wracking issues such as environmental deterioration or shortage of natural resource are originated from overpopulation. Consequently, having fewer or non-children can diminish the population density and thereby making a great contribution to tackle these aforementioned hassles. Another plus point that is worth considering is that parents with fewer offsprings can be better nurturers. By the way of exemplifying, bread-winners in multi-child families allegedly need to spend more time at work in order to have financial sufficiency to foster their children and thereby resulting in the lack of attention and parental guidance
In conclusion, many people are choosing to have fewer or non-children due to the transformation in social structure and this is a good trend as it helps to solve problems related to overpopulation as well as allow parents to be better nurturers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3025210084 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1861855499 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.401727064 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.615384615 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236511273692 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072760210133 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067557073975 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153736432094 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505946684691 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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