In many places, prisons are overcrowded and expensive for governments to maintain. Yet, when offenders are released, they end up back in prison a short while later. Does prison work? Should lawbreakers be rehabilitated or punished?
Imprisonment is one of the most common forms of punishment in several countries. However, how effective this system is when a high percentage of prisoner’s relapse into crime once they are released into the community. From my point of view, sentencing criminals to time in prison fail in most cases.
Undeniably, prison is the best place for offenders to rehabilitate. Firstly, in prisons, criminals are locked up and must take part in some reformed courses to become better ones or do community services for their society. Secondly, when being in prisons, people who commit an offense have more time to think about what they did and realize what they need to do instead of receiving prison sentences. Finally, the prison has a function to help innocent people have safety life. For example, if one-day prisons disappear, they will be scare about surrounding things, and criminals will threaten the safety of society anytime, anywhere. Life will be a terrible mess.
However, depending on levels of crime and groups of ages, it exists a few suitable punishments. If a criminal is just a teenager, he or she will be rehabilitated in re-education camps. For those who engage in major crime like killing, rape, treason, the government should impose several stricter punishments. A death sentence or life imprisonment is a proper punishment for offenders putting society in danger. Based on the law, other offenders face different levels of punishment. For example, a person who commits an aggravated robbery with the use of a weapon should be punished from one to five years in prison.
In conclusion, I understand that criminals posing a threat to society cannot be allowed to roam freely, or perhaps prison is not the only restricted way. So, the severity of the crime committed should be taken into consideration before deciding on the punishment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89610464096 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598684210526 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8560469881 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6470588235 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274888544566 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838171779425 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507298087407 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158674529547 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396929459677 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.