Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature？ Is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?
According to the statement, most of the scientists consider that it is able to survey that the toddlers will grown towards crime or nor by their behaviour. It seems to me that, is not viable to determine a human by it's outside world. Additionally, is is practicable to avoid children from growing towards offence and to be offenders. Both the view points are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in contemporary settings, crime rates become at peak which are done by all age groups. However, is is impossible to figure out an individual by their nature likewise we do not judge a book by it's cover. Therefore, there are numerous masses who are pretty in behaviour but in reality they are lawbreakers. For instance, in present duration, rape, sexual harassment and molestation casses are increasing day by day. By follow this, there was rape case which was come in from from the small town of Delhi where a teenager was raped by a rikshaw driver. In this criteria, girl did not realise about the attention of that offender which was towards her. Yet, he rapined that girl. Therefore, it is not viable to consider a person through their outside world.
Furthermore, there are numerous ways to avoid the children from growing up to offenders. The first and foremost cause is attention of parey. In this criteria, if parents give their cost effective time to their children for teaching them superior manners in all ways, thus, this may lead to change in the toddlers towards crime. Furthermore, if guidence pay attention towards their social activities such as watching crime episodes, web series and so on. Hence, this also improves the mentality of children. Moreover, schools should held crime awareness programmes. Due to these events, children become aware of offence and this also shows a great positive impression on their frame of mind.
To recapitulate, I personally believe that , there is no way to judge an individual by their nature whether they are offenders or not. However, there are also plenty of ways to teach children such as parents attention , awareness programmes and so on which becomes viable for them to fend off from offence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94520547945 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69527055514 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558904109589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2514770648 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9523809524 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.380952381 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145372789207 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418639397707 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509057329224 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936097868991 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369983306126 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.