Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be criminals. To what extent do you think crime is determined by human nature？ Is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals?
Nowadays, crime rate is inclining rapidly. Some scientists think we should study the behaviour of tedders to see weather they grow towards crime yet it is only wastage of time and money. I believe that crime is depend on environment of society. I will shed some light on this notion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, crime is determined by human nature. If parents or tutor give superior education and knowledge, therefore children do not determine towards crime. Government should enforce the law about the awareness of crime in schools. Every school must held a event of awareness regarding crime at monthly or annually. Due to this, pupils do not tend into the crime. Some children admire from their parents because if parents are criminals then children are also become criminal in some situations but we don't judge book by it's cover therefore this criteria not lead on everyone.
Furthermore, it is possible to stop toddlers from growing up to the criminals. If parents give cost effective time to their children and listen their problems amd become solve them then no one children could criminal. For instance, Pablo Escobar was the most popular criminal in 1990s amd his son is doing work and live their life on their own way because his mother teaches him superior lessons and give time that he deserved. Therefore due to rat race of money, parents do not give quality time to their children amd they become in stress and depressed because no one listen their issues. In 1991, scientists survey said , 60% of crime was done by mental and stressful persons. Therefore, parents should give quality time to their children.
To conclude, I consider that, schools must held the events regarding crime awareness despite others events as well as parents give time to their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94701986755 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4713500669 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7511889303 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8823529412 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189257803603 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714512075177 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605828893998 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115815666233 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540174189294 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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