Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing number of sports facilities. Others,however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that others measures are required. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
According to the statement, some masses believe that increase in number of sports facilities is the best method for improving the health of public. On contrast, others think that another measures are more effective and also required in comparison with sports because this may show little impact. According to my opinion, the former view is more supportive and both the views are justified in the upcoming paragraphs below.
To begin with, according to few number of individuals,sports improve public health with better aspects and there are few reasons behind this. The first and foremost reason is physical work which include in outdoor sports. Due to this, people become able to make themselves healthy because, in contemporary settings, every individuals have their hectic schedule of work. Therefore, they become in trap of many chronic diseases such as obesity and diabetes and so on. By analysing such problems, if they participate in sports in their residential complex. Then, by this way, they may burn their calories by doing physical activities in their leisure time.
On the other hand, others and I personally believe that, although sports play a vital role to become healthy, but other measures are more convenient such as by awaring the public about physical activities and in this aspect, government can play an essential role. Because, if legal authorities organise a campaign to aware the youth about the importance of health and how greatly physical efforts play essential role for better health. By such aspect, public become more attractive towards their health. In addition, if people make their healthy diet schedule, this also play a vital role for healthy lifestyle. For instance, if individuals eat more nutritional and vitamin rich food rather than junk food, then this show a great positive impact on their immune system and their body will become disease resistance.
To conclude, I personally believe that, more number of sport facilities are not sufficient methods to become healthy because other measures are more effective such as awareness among public about physical activities and proper nutritional diet schedule.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3137829912 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66237223833 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542521994135 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5949843495 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274129989314 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948531061392 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826698016971 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189461068116 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841210670585 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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