Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?
In this modern era, technology become too vast and advanced, their novel researches show a great impact on the life of public. From such research, one of is robots. Thus, more number of individuals utilise the machinery bots to complete their tasks at home and work too. It seem to me as negative development as reasons are discussed below.
To begin with, in contemporary settings, most of the individuals are rushed through busy and hectic schedule. Due to this, they promote the usage of robots in all tasks which leads to great negative impress on their lives. The first and foremost reason for this criteria is that people become inattentive towards their duty. In such manner, masses become depend on bots for their all piece of work at home which make them lasy and careless. Hence, this also shows bad impact in their health too. Because, if individuals do not done any labour then they may suffer from numerous health problems such as obesity due to long hours rest, dispersion and so on.
In addition, the another factor for this criteria is declined in their knowledge and all skills. Because, if individuals become entirely depend on automoton then they become lack of knowledge, skills in every sector especially in business. For instance, in business sector, individuals have to be knowledgeable and their communication skills also must. However, if they fully relate on robots then the environment of their work may disturbed. Because, robots are only part of machine which do tasks under command. However, if individuals increase the utilisation of bots then they may face problems such as defects in any part of not or any other machinery problem. As a result, this becomes delay in their business sector and may leads to failure.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that robots show negative progression in all sectors for every task because this leads to numerous complications for individuals such as inactivity, failure in business and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02752293578 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68816210936 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519877675841 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0098226716 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137960019011 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478436775739 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636419726353 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953687594863 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042128851072 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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