Many small, local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this effect local communities? How could this situation be improved?
With the rise of globalisation, companies are spreading across different parts of the world. These companies sell things right from furniture to food items and hence the word supermarket. Big business tycoons setup multiple branches in different countries. As a result of which, the local markets are dying. There are numerous factors to this phenomenon, this essay will discuss the same along with a few plausible solutions.
One of the key causes of the problem is that, these big marts sell all the things necessary for living a comfortable life, which includes grocery, vegetables, fruits, clothing, electronics and many more things. It is basically a one stop location for everything. Moreover, all the items are at discounted prices which attracts the customers to buy more than required. For instance, supermarkets like Target have a plethora of products which provides special discounts during any local festivals. Likewise, they provide the facility to order things online for people who are too busy to travel to the store and home deliver it round the clock. It becomes very difficult for the local shops to compete with all these facilities due to which they loss a lot of customer base.
There are few possible solutions to tackle this problem. First and Foremost, the local shops should healthily compete and stay on par with the changing demands of the people like for instance, nowadays people are interested to try new things like a foreign fruit, if local retailers start selling them then it would definitely help their business. They could provide extra amenities like deliver at customers home door. Moreover, it is very important to strategize their business like provide good quality goods which the supermarkets greatly lack. Similarly, opening their store online, which will widen their scope of reach. Additionally, the government could take some minimal steps in terms policy and taxes to ensure local business are alive.
In conclusion, there are objective and subjective reasons for decline in small shops and the solutions might seem quite complex to implement, but in the long run it would be best for these shop owners to go through and see fruitful results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tycoons'' or 'tycoon's'?
Suggestion: tycoons'; tycoon's
...ence the word supermarket. Big business tycoons setup multiple branches in different co...
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Line 3, column 750, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun customer seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of customers'.
Suggestion: a lot of customers
...these facilities due to which they loss a lot of customer base. There are few possible solutio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1797752809 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60962161706 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592696629213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4206852754 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183522974392 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540200020653 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460370913274 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107497788802 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028106020134 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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