Many small local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area.How does this effect local communities. How could this solution be improved.
In today's globalised, Urbanized and the over-populated world, more and more individuals are purchasing things which they need from shops and supermarkets. Many people argue that local shops are closing in current areas and they are moving to the large markets in order to earn more money. This essay will discuss the problem associated with this phenomenon, and offer some measure to takle this issue.
From an overall perspective, There are variety of issues, which result from supermarkets. If local shops close, individuals would not purchase own choice of things from stores due to high prices of products. The result of this phenomenon might be that poverty will rise steadily day by day, and also crime rate go up, like as robbery and theft. For instance, A recent survey concluded by the BBC report 45% shops have closed in Asian countries.
Despite these arguments, there are number of possible solutions. Firstly, local masses should open new shops in every corner of the street. Poor people can afford it easily without feeling any challenges. Secondly,If government implement high taxes on superstores, people will not move to it. The decision as to whether government should pay money to poor people on every month for challenging these problems must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To conclude, This is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society. However, I believe the best solution is that authorities should take high taxes from supermarkets then this problem could be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.188 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6722544789 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9132273773 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241746812454 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072108605341 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692157553274 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143677676616 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742480203496 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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