The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
The last few decades have seen enormous changes in the way of people's lives are affected by the advancement in technological fields such as internet and computers. There are those who say that internet is beneficial for every person in order to getting data from it, however others believe that many negative effects on individuals who use internet. This essay will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks of this contentious arguments and provide an overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are various key advantages of using internet through computers and smartphones. Firstly, it is a quickest source to get knowledge about everything. This mean that, If any person who search on internet, they might get data in few seconds without felling any challenges. For example, A recent research concluded that in the era of modernization, due to the report of BBC every second person spend time on using internet. A further merit of this idea could be that Internet connect with the whole globe, every body can make foreign friends with chat online.
Despite these arguments, there are several disadvantages of it. Fundamentally, If masses spend more time on internet, they would not focus on other kind of activities like as education and sports. The result of this phenomenon might be that people will feel lonely, isolated and alienated which in turn leads to personal problems like as depression and alcoholism. Secondly, If individuals see bad things on internet, they will add in many illegal activities such as robbery and theft. The decision as to whether people should collect information about studies on internet must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To conclude, this is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society. Taking the above in to account, it would appear that there are more pros than cons. Internet not only provide information, but also it is a source of communication with foreigners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.159375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80330266995 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8218681291 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194426590648 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592089398123 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322423605457 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111648596848 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265971237803 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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