The number of people shopping online is increasing dramatically. What are the benefits of shopping online? Are there any disadvantages?
In today's globalised, Urbanized and the over-populated world more and more individuals are purchasing own choice of things from internet in order to completing their desire dreams. There are those who say that online shopping is beneficial for masses however others believe that there are many negative effects on poor masses.This essay will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks of this contentious argument and provide an overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are two key pros of online shopping. Firstly, it is a source of time effective. This mean that If any body who busy in their work, they can purchase various things easily without feeling any challenges.For example, A recent research concluded that 40% people who live in Japan, they buying things from internet for saving their crucial time.A further merit of this idea could be that online shopping provide employment to local masses.The result of this phenomenon might be that poverty would decline slightly.
Despite these arguments, there are various cons. Fundamentally online shopping provide bad quality things to people. If any body who buy it, they would not get return money. As a result, individuals will feel lonely, isolated and alienated which in turn leads to personal problems like as depression and alcoholism. The decision as to whether people should purchase things by conventional shopping must be seen in the context of entire society.
To sum up, This is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society. Taking to above in to account, it would appear that there are more advantages than disadvantages of internet shopping. If online shopping provide cheapest things, poor masses will easily affordable it.
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first, firstly, however, if, so, as to, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3503649635 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73662280452 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598540145985 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.856058001 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.769230769 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207588230905 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710182704573 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725954427671 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131987335436 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313778510186 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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