In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In today's globalised, Urbanized and the over-populated world, more and more individuals are reading newspapers, magazines and books in order to getting knowledge about what is happening around them and in the world. It has been suggested that printed newspapers will not study in the future due to the modern technology like as internet. I partially agree with this statement and in this essay I will give some contentious arguments and provide an overall opinion.

From an overall perspective, perhaps the most compelling reason why people will not buy printed newspapers is because In the era of modernization every body will busy in their personal life, no one has extra time for purchasing newspapers. This mean that If they read it, they would not focus on their work completely. A further point in favour of this idea could be that Newspapers and books will more expensive in the future, people prefor to read online for saving money. For example, A recent research concluded by the Harvard university, In nest years production of books and newspapers will decline dramatically.

On the flip side, there are several arguments against. Fundamentally, Reading online is a source of time saving because, they can read any time any where in the world with out felling any challenges. In the past people used to spend money on purchasing books but these days internet makes life easier than in the past. The decision as to whether individuals should study online for saving money and time, must be seen in the context of the entire society.

To conclude, this is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society. However, I feel quite strongly that In the future people will read newspapers on internet without paying money. If government implement more desirable policies on internet, it will be beneficial for future generations.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In todays globalised, Urbanized and the over-populated world, more and more ...
^^
Line 2, column 310, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot study in the future due to the modern technology like as internet. I partially...
^^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or purchasing newspapers. This mean that If they read it, they would not focus on...
^^
Line 5, column 547, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... concluded by the Harvard university, In nest years production of books and newsp...
^^
Line 8, column 145, Rule ID: ANY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anywhere'?
Suggestion: anywhere
... saving because, they can read any time any where in the world with out felling any chall...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 168, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...an read any time any where in the world with out felling any challenges. In the past peo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 270, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...end money on purchasing books but these days internet makes life easier than in the ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 333, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...e easier than in the past. The decision as to whether individuals should study online for sav...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the future people will read newspapers on internet without paying money. If gov...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, as to, for example, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09836065574 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79089393467 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0369755543 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312148136625 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099076078644 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661512160383 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181862318304 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654606036854 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.