Some people believe that traveling alone really beneficial in learning country's culture and experience, while others believe it is better to travel with someone you know. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's globalised, Urbanized and the over-populated world, more and more individuals are travelling to foreign countries as a visitor. There are those who say that traveling alone is beneficial for the people, however others believe that traveling with group masses might get knowledge briefly. This essay will examine the both sides of the contentious argument and provide an overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, perhaps the most compelling reason why people travel alone is because it is a cheapest source for getting knowledge. This mean that If individuals travel with out any person to out of country, they would learn there culture and tradition with out felling any challenges. For example, A recent research conducted that 40% of visitors who live in European countries, they travel alone every year. A further point in favour of this idea could be that Unless people travel alone, they can not know how to foreign people live and which food they most like there.
On the flip side, there are several arguments against. Fundamentally, traveling with group is more desirable for visitors.This is because, they will not feel boring. Secondly,If any body who do not know those places, another person would guide properly.The result of this phenomenon might be that, they will get more knowledge in short period of time. The decision as to whether individuals should travel with someone for learning knowledge deeply must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To conclude, this is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society. Having considered both sides of the argument, I will argue that both sides are critical. If government provide facilities to visitors, more people will visit foreign countries and know cultures and traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25087108014 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71694796823 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1530908445 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250377095087 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830838781247 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616058891159 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154671442928 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582637174673 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.